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KJOTT
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since 2012-12-26
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Canada

0 posted 2021-05-09 11:04 AM


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the buzz and hum of summer days
the lean times too, broke but hopeful—
believing hope was home enough
do you remember
with arms linked and like sunbeams
under newly opened summer skies
splashing laughter like water

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2021-05-14 04:26 PM


while waiting summer, hoping, love the poem
yann

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
2 posted 2021-05-15 11:28 PM


KJOTT, Thanks for this,
Loved it Poet!


Sky~

~Do You Know That Feeling
Of Just Wanting To Get Lost
In a Starry night~..


Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA
3 posted 2021-05-16 01:24 AM


Interesting composition. Well done.
Poet In Pink
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Posts 1066
MI
4 posted 2021-05-27 11:34 PM


Wonderful word painting
Especially liked the last line
Alana  

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