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Brooklyn Bridge
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Brooklyn Bridge |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
What was I thinking on the Brooklyn Bridge, Leaving behind me the caresses of the past, above the hustle and bustle of tyres, I didn't want to break down and held my wheel Like a treasure, What was i thinking on the Brooklyn Bridge, I wasn't thinking of God, I was watching my road map in the seat, I was listening to the song of the tyres, careful not to mislead me. What I was thinking on the Brooklyn Bridge, To something insurmountable, The sour forgetting of Cathy. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Yann, This was Cool, Sad, & Pensive all at the same time..& takes the reader to that moment we've all been..at one time or another. Sky~ ~Do You Know That Feeling |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks sky, now it is an ancient story, i just remembered of Brooklyn Bridge (1996) yann |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This put many images in my mind...but I've been in a dark place so prolly should just say...I liked this. Got my mind wondering. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Michael, we shared a strange feeling there yann |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
What "sky" said! My Brooklyn Bridge was the north-east corner of an aircraft carrier flight deck in Yokohama, Japan . . . reading a Dear John letter. Turned out if was a boon for the rest of my life! j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Jwesley, i loved your experience, from Japan, a very interesting one yann |
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