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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
She She will let you in but only if you knock she holds the key so if her doors unlock you gotta respect her actions speak louder than words it's a level playing field and if you want to know how she feels well she's more than you think she's not there just to shrink to fit neatly within your hand you've got to understand the will the heart the bones she's real, she's smart, she will let it show shower her love down on you only if you're true her boundaries are clear and don't push if she says no there's so much more you could do together if you're patient for love to grow her garden gate will only open one way and you've got to listen to what she has to say but just keep the faith, keep the flame men and women we're all different but our wishes and desires are the same love is living life at the fullest it's not a game but just keep cool, keep this all in mind as your love like a blossom grows hey, it's just a block up the street, take a left and then man you're good to go she is waiting she is waiting in these dark times for a little true love to show "Beauty has a way of seeming unconcerned" - Neil Finn, 'Terrorize Me' |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Rings of fatherly advice or perhaps, motherly...to a point. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
I hadn't had that in mind but I suppose it could be. More along the lines of from one man to another is what I had sorta had in mind. Thank you. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
With that in mind, Zach, and as an afterthought, I should have put it; "...up to a point", thus leaving room for further interpretation. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Some good advice in a fine poetic way. I enjoyed the trip down the page. Good stuff! true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
"She" is all that and more  Wonderfully expressed soul drifter ~ Much enjoyed the read...Wished more men felt like you do ~ Alana |
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