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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 2018-01-24 11:10 PM







A balmy breeze
Blows whisper kisses
Across my fevered flesh
Arousing passions desire
Within blissful thoughts
Of
You

Pink studded stars
Wink with a knowing grin
Shimmering onto my
Soft quivering lips
Awakening the sweet taste
Of
You

Moonbeams aflutter
Seductively play
Upon plum ringlets
Dampened by the heat
With searing thoughts
Of
You

Fireflies glow and dance
Electrifying the night
Kindling spasms of sparks
Within my love~crazed eyes
With a burning want
Of
You

Intimate night lays
Quietly close
Cuddled by the hush
Caressing every sigh to
Blanket the lonely void left
Of
You

© Poet In Pink


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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2018-01-24 11:22 PM


Those balmy breezes will do it to you every time
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-01-25 02:32 AM


There are lovers...and then there's you, Miss Pinky. You're not alone, but you are in a class of your own. The warm, sensuous qualities in this piece tell me this is so.

...and then there's this:
quote:
"Pink studded stars
Wink with a knowing grin
Shimmering onto my
Soft quivering lips
Awakening the sweet taste
Of
You"
A playful sexuality that pulls at passions yet to be discovered. That being said, I feel it's only right that you replace my keyboard, Miss Pinky. You see, by the time I finally finished reading your gently intense poetry, I found that my tongue was stuck between the 'F' key and the 'K' key and the saliva that was produced killed it for sure.

Can we talk about it? Just make a left at the light...     

Oh... Here's a little something for you, Miss Pinky. It's not much, but it comes from the heart: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8u1zH11yqFQ


...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (01-25-2018 03:09 AM).]

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2018-01-25 10:25 AM


Wow! You got me all excited!

Beautiful romantic spin! Loved it.

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2018-01-25 04:13 PM


Heh.Heh As for me I'm all a quiver. Jesus that is a beautiful soul-searching poem.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado
5 posted 2018-01-26 01:39 AM


I count any day in my life that I wore love-crazed eyes on my face a great day indeed.

Wonderful writing here, I've come to expect that from you. Keep up the loveliness, my pink poetic friend.

Poet In Pink
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6 posted 2018-01-28 03:14 PM


Hello Rex Thank you for stopping by for a read and you are right! Every time ~ Alana
Poet In Pink
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7 posted 2018-01-28 03:18 PM


Thank you Bluesy for your kind words ~ Happy to hear you enjoyed and I thank you for sharing the MB video link ~ Good tune Appreciate your time and replies always
Poet In Pink
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8 posted 2018-01-28 03:20 PM


Thank you for the read ethome ~ Appreciate your kind comment Alana
Poet In Pink
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9 posted 2018-01-28 03:21 PM


Hi Jerry nice to hear from you ~ Thank you for the read ~ Happy to know you enjoyed my friend Alana
Poet In Pink
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10 posted 2018-01-28 03:25 PM


Thank you so much soul drifter for your kind words and heartwarming compliment ~ It means a lot   Alana
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