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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2018-01-24 11:26 PM



~~~
Not far it was from Heaven
'twas the very month of June
and the sweetest birds were singing
when first
she stole my tune ...

As if from out the bluest sky
an angel came to call

Quintessence of Irish memory
with braids as I recall

The golden sun's shine o'er the dew
reflected
through her eyes

Like flowers
from a woodland path
her smile just mesmerized

With dancer's wings she stepped along
my song held in her arms

My blue eyes dreaming
hypnotized
now locked within her charms

"Good day kind sir"
sweet melody
embraced my very soul

With butterflies and rubber thighs
my tongue
I swear it swoll

My heart stood tall
to brace my jaw
an lock the molars tight

The best I managed
was a smile
my voice had taken flight

Pausing
she locked her gaze to mine
reached out to my lapel

Placed a fragrant flower there
bent close
to share its smell

The moment
stole my breath from me

I gazed in pure delight

Enchanted with her beauty rare
awoke
to silent night
~~~

© Copyright 2018 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2018-01-25 10:21 AM


Hey Rex you sure had me going.
Don't ya hate waking up from a dream like that!!
I really enjoyed this.

true love never looks after it's own interests

Poet In Pink
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MI
2 posted 2018-01-28 03:12 PM


Sounds to me like blue eyes were dreaming a sweet dream ~ The best kind Much enjoyed Rex ~ Nice to see you posting here ~ Alana
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2018-02-03 12:27 PM


Always enjoy your poetry, Rex.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
4 posted 2018-02-03 08:15 PM


Eric... if i have this dream any more often, i may not wake

Alana... thank you,  it surely is the best dream

Ida... Thank you so much. I enjoy reading you too

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2018-02-20 08:24 PM


Like your dreams better than mine, my friend . . . always good to see your writing. Always enjoy.

just like this time,

j.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
6 posted 2018-02-21 12:09 PM


quote:
"The best I managed
was a smile
my voice had taken flight
How virginally innocent of a line.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2018-02-21 05:22 AM


Rex,
This poem is like the promise of springtime!
What a lovely dream! I enjoyed this very much.
~L

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