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Open Poetry #50

Just to Hold Him Close

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2018-02-20 05:20 AM

With a piece of paper
and a pen full of his heart,
he writes to her.
He sends her his love
in ways that make her smile
and dream of their future together.
The everyday things he tells her
lets her know home is ready
and waiting for her light to fill it.
His love is constant
as the air she breathes.
His desire for her
still catches her breath.
She hugs each envelope
to her breast,
just to hold him close.

LGR(C)2/20/20

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2018-02-20 04:27 PM

Outstanding, my friend. One of your best!
Very much enjoyed. You definitely nailed this one!

Jimmy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2018-02-20 04:39 PM

Thanks Jimmy! I'm glad you liked it. It is always good to hear from you. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2018-02-21 12:41 PM

Each line is as factual as if I'd written myself.
Few could know the depth and dimension
well enough to write as you do, Miss Lori.

You how much I appreciate you, don't you.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2018-02-21 05:04 AM

Awe shucks Bluesy,
You make it so easy. You have already painted the picture with all your poems. I just write 'em as I sees 'em. ~L

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