Open Poetry #50 |
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prière of earth |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Without these elegant princesses, Without my sisters of the sky, Without these laces in the fine ears, Without these oranges in the long neck, Without these stars in my heart, Without you my sweet sisters, Without you my strange giraffes, do not call me anymore "earth" |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry Yann, but didn't understand it. Understand it is about the stars in he sky, but "Strange giraffes, laces in the fine ears, oranges in the long neck, I just do not “get.” ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Jerry, there is no trouble here, no obligation to get something, the lace was supposed to describe the lightness, the delicateness, orange is the color of giraffes, i feel the translation from french didn't get the point, you don't have to feel sorry at all, you are very welcome for reading yann |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
My sister looked more like a giraffe when she laid on her back than when she stood up. Mom was just the opposite. Thanks yann, for reminding me of that. BTS ...just bein' Bluesy |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Okay, I've lived a lot of years. in Canada, but Sadly I don't know French..so what's priere? I am feeling like you're writing about the fruits of the earth, that without them earth will not be earth? |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks bluesy, you made me smiling. and appreciate your sister too, have a good day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi JJote, i guess we can call giraffes a fruits of the earth, this si a great image, concerning the prière , this is a prayer, i can guess you were not living in quebec, thanks for all the comments yann |
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