Open Poetry #50 |
Optimistic is the Night |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wish somebody else would post, but . . . I love to look toward the sky, And that is why I am so high. Oh, beautiful sun shinning true, As if the entire wide world knew. Eh, behind the clouds it can hide, ’Specially when I’ve had such pride. Looking ahead is such a sweet joy, I feel like a young grinning boy. It takes not much to make me proud, I am out from under those clouds. Don’t know what tomorrow will bring, I only know that tonight I cling. ©January 6, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Jerry, you are looking bright stars, then childhood become a friend, these are sweet links for the reader yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so very much, yann, for being here tonight, you are much appreciated. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You're right JerryPat, more should post including myself. In the meantime, allow me to say that I enjoyed your uplifting poem very much. BTS ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
My friend you just have to accept that it is lonely at the top. It is the price you pay for being so prolific. Being consumed with writing is a good thing for you. But for the rest of us mere pencil pushers it is something to strive for. Cut us hacks some slack, Jack! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks Bluesy. I am always happy to see you here. Don't blame you in the least o not posting. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You and many other poets here are certainly not hacks,Lori. Hush yo mouf. Thank you. See you have a poem titled "Rain." Headed there. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
quote:It's what some call "The Now", as I'm sure you've heard Jerry. Not a bad place to be at all. More good things from you. Always interesting and thought-provoking. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
And more good reviews from you, Ari. Thank you so much for all of them . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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