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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-01-13 10:58 AM

I made an extraordinary journey,
In your unlimited sky,
In my changeable dreams,
I made a beautiful journey,
I dreamed about you with kings
In blacks favelas,
In dark brothels
Near the cruel soldiers.
I imagined you in arms
More numerous than wolves,
Even Zeus caressed you
In my crazy thoughts.
I made an extraordinary travel
I have no regrets,
The roses also were jealous
Of your forbidden flavors,
I made a beautiful journey,
Princess, I too much loved you.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2017-01-13 11:31 AM

Oh boy, yann . . . The ones we love never seem to leave us and our thoughts and dreams and daytime visions continually give us horrendous things to conjure up in our minds.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2017-01-13 12:54 PM

thanks Jerry, comprehension and passion are delicious daughters of mother poetry,

have a good day

yann

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

3 posted 2017-01-13 01:52 PM

I always enjoy your poetry yann, especially these 'stand alone' lines"

quote:
"The roses also were jealous Of your forbidden flavors,
I made a beautiful journey, Princess, I too much loved you

...but your reply to Jerry really caught my attention

quote:
"comprehension and passion are delicious daughters of mother poetry"

Most profund my friend.

Ari

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2017-01-14 06:20 AM

I have to agree with both JP and Ari ...

especially that "comprehension and passion are delicious
daughters of mother poetry" is a truly fine line !

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2017-01-14 10:22 AM

thanks ari, your comment is very appreciated,
love reading you too, this one is landmark
yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2017-01-14 10:24 AM

thanks Bruce, true words are the best, your comment is fine and very appreciated

have a good day

yann

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