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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI 
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Oh my sweet lover Have no fear Though you can't see me I'm right here I'm the moonbeams Dancin' cross your floor The waves that embrace you At the shore I'm the twinkle Of the stars above Simply close your eyes And sense my love I'm the delicate rose In full bloom I'm the scent of your Favorite perfume You'll find me in A warm balmy breeze As it softly whispers Through your trees I'm the sunshine That kisses your skin When you need me Just look from within So when you ask "Where are you tonight?" Know I'm always there Though out of sight © Poet In Pink https://youtu.be/qrei53NV30c |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Such beauty, romance, and sensuousness embracing each stanza, Miss Pinky. I wanted to warm myself with each one, but my confession is that I find myself an easy mark with this... quote:You're a dangerous woman, Miss Pinky. It's best you stay home tonight.  "Forget me not?"..."Forget you never!"  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic flow, captured me from beginning to end. Each verse made me look forward to the next one. If I was the subject I think I'd want you around. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Pinkymelt, Obviously you have hit a tender spot with the fellas with this one. It is no wonder, it is a beautiful piece. Way to go girlie! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh my, you do have a way with words to soothe the savage beast. Never noticed it before, but the initials in your name are the same as the ones in Passions in Poetry. Gotta love it! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very beautiful..the love you write of is tangible. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you so much for your more than kind words Bluesy You always say the nicest things & I do appreciate you |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Pleased to meet you Ethome Thank you kindly for taking the time to read and leaving such a nice comment. Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thankies Lori Belle for your sweet reply Glad you enjoyed! Pinkymelt |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for your kind reply Jerry Always so nice to hear from you ~ I didn't notice the PIP thing...Kinda cool Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for your visit and sweet words Blues Always so good to hear from you ~ Hope you had a wonderful holiday ~ Alana |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful poem. I love romantic poetry! Hugs, Ethel <CENTER><A href="http://ethelscreations.net/index.html"><STRONG><FONT size=1>Ethel's Creations</A> <A hr |
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RhymingReason New Member
since 2018-01-06
Posts 6UK |
Lovely emotional exploration of the yearning which may come from a long distance relationship, maybe berevement or even being the "other woman". Reading your words in glowing pink adds a special atmosphere to the poem. Your delicacy and subtelty are elements which are often lacking from my own poetry. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you so much Ethel ~ I'm happy to hear you enjoyed this Appreciate your time and comment ~ Huggerz Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Pleased to meet you RR Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a kind reply ~ Much appreciated. Look forward to reading one of your poems as well. Alana |
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