The Case For Monolithic Envy: To Be A Wallflower Set In Stone...

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Open Poetry #50

The Case For Monolithic Envy: To Be A Wallflower Set In Stone...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-12-20 02:51 AM

It was a night caressed by warm summer breezes whose fingers were eager to do just what pleases,
the waters were tranquil and calm

The stars shone so brightly yet touched my eyes lightly,
moonbeams danced in sarongs

Their ballroom was grand and each grain of sand
reflected great crystalline splendor

Huge columns of stone stood all alone, what they've seen,
no man can remember

But for their uses, I found no excuses when searching my soul for content
Until she is free and comes home to me, it's all memories which I have spent

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2017-12-20 05:08 AM

This is beautiful Bluesy, even the bittersweet ending. Your imagery is so unique.

"The stars shone so brightly yet touched my eyes lightly,
moonbeams danced in sarongs"

I love the way you write! ~L

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

2 posted 2017-12-20 11:23 PM

Just think of all the new precious memories you will make

Beautifully brushed heart words Bluesy ~ Enjoyed

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2017-12-22 04:12 AM

Yes, you're right, Miss Pinky.

Now, as the time draws near, everything I do has her scent about it. I'm feeling that time is no longer my enemy.

Thanks so much, dear friend.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2017-12-29 03:29 PM

Thank you so much, Miss Lori. I appreciate your comments a great deal.

...just bein' Bluesy

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