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Underneath the Christmas Tree
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Underneath the Christmas Tree |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Underneath the Christmas tree is a gathering of gifts wrapped by me. The Granddaughter’s is so big it had to be bagged. Each one I lovingly tagged From: and To: whom Even for one still in the womb. My head is dancing with love and joy thinking of playing with grandson and his new toy. Each package warmed my heart as I thought about the wrapping torn apart and the surprise inside revealed. Until then my lips are sealed. I’m full of the Christmas Spirit, happy as I can be. My Christmas cheer is all wrapped up underneath the Christmas tree. LGR©12/18/17 |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Bravo! Take the rest of the night off!  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Don't mind if I do, it's my bed time. Glad you liked my feeble attempt to take a whack at rhyming. Pinky makes it look effortless, my @$$! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Love you love for your gifts. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
This one has me smiling  What a delightful poem! I saw that comment you made about rhyming...lol Your rhymes were great!!! Much enjoyed |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, I'd say it is more my love for the people the gifts are going to. ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hey Pinkypoo! Got the first two lines right off the bat, then it was a struggle to go on. Once I got into it, it got easier. But then you will notice it is a short poem. Thanks. ~L |
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