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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-12-16 02:36 AM


I used to fall for fuller figured girls, but as she leaned her leanness on me,
supporting her slight, slenderness close enough to whisper...my tastes quickly changed

In a room lending a variety of shadows, she and I had come to talk in comfort and confidence
on a borrowed bed of Murphy distinction, so to speak, and a window featuring a staccato of multicolored neon

I tried to learn her lines of communication, but before I knew it, the half-light turned into the morning after
Covered by linens on-loan, memories of her feminine form faded into the ether along with my last sixty-nine bucks

...I won’t forget you Esther, or your quiet, comely and curvacious conversation


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jottmTH-_Q



...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (12-16-2017 04:53 AM).]

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Poet In Pink
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MI
1 posted 2017-12-16 03:12 PM


Thanks for the smile Bluesy Nothing like a great conversation!  Enjoyed the video  it was spot on with your write

Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2017-12-16 04:51 PM


You're so brilliant, Miss Pinky! Let's talk it over...and over...and over!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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3 posted 2017-12-17 08:37 AM


Another one of your fabulous little tales. I thought I had commented on this already but apparently not. Good job as always my friend.
~L

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
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Colorado
4 posted 2017-12-17 09:43 AM


Nothing like a comely curvaceous feminine form. I loved all your word choices here, just fantastic.

Hell of a title too!

Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 2017-12-17 04:54 PM


Thank you so much, Miss Lori.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2017-12-17 04:55 PM


Much obliged, SD!

...just bein' Bluesy

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