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Open Poetry #50

A Sudden Storm

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2017-12-09 06:26 PM

it was raining torrents
we stood there
notwithstanding
and she . . .
with her sweet tongue's effort
cleansed my past
put a voodoo charm on me
teased my blushing
with a silken moist trace
a ruffled whisper
and a kiss which bonded
like no other
caused my stalwart to falter
nearly giving way
her lips left my own
in a mad fluttering of need
touched, but unfulfilled
I shivered, reached for her fantastic
she was boldly outgoing
enfolded me inside her unusual
and kiss by tender kiss she fed me her adorable
I felt myself glowing
with delight and ecstasy
it made me incredibly complete
before I'd been empty
now I surrendered to the
emancipation of my passion
she brought me from then to now
sharing love in the midst of
a South Louisiana torrential rainstorm

©November 2, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2017-12-09 09:04 PM

Some are recalled quite vividly, and then there are a few that shouldn't be recalled at all. Glad you shared this one, Jerry.

But it wasn't always raining in the South. Had a little snow down there in the 'Rouge.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-12-10 10:41 AM

Yeah you're right. We received probably over an inch of the white stuff here in Thibodaux.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

3 posted 2017-12-12 09:36 PM

A passionate write from start to finish Jerry Much enjoyed! Alana

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2017-12-18 07:57 PM

Thanks, Alana, I have had computer trouble for a week, good to be back.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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