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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-12-03 01:44 AM


The mannequins move upon the screen, air-brushing reality from the dream,
Woman defined by only her home, generic male is industry's drone

Art imitates life, to the neighbors' acclaim as the ersatz couple are perfectly framed
With their synthetic children and enamel smiles, behold; “Still Life With Plastic Tiles”

So the interrogation begins, the spotlight falls upon the wife’s sins:
“HOW CLEAN IS YOUR HOUSE? ARE YOU ONE OF US?” Quick! Clean the dirt, and polish the dust!

The whole world glares through double-glazed eyes at your pitch-black whites and your cellulite thighs
Eight out of ten say you're incomplete ‘til your soul smiles back at you from clean white sheets

So exorcise your home in the Aryan way and keep the dust devils safely at bay
Scrub your children until they bleed, or people will think that you're strange indeed

...just bein' Bluesy

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Poet In Pink
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1 posted 2017-12-03 01:58 AM


Hmmm...Speaking of strange!  lol  This lil' ditty is bouncing off the pristine walls!!  ha ha  Definitely a lot going on in this gem ~ Thankies for the smile Bluesy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2017-12-03 03:16 AM


So glad you see it that way, Miss Pinky. Yes, a "whole lot goin' on"...

Many Thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2017-12-03 05:57 AM


How glibly you speak of my demons, Bluesy!
And the children only bled a little. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2017-12-03 05:34 PM


Yes, Miss Lori, I've gotta lay off those '50's family sitcoms! Tell me you don't do house chores in nylons and high-heels!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2017-12-03 08:02 PM


Bluesy, when I put on nylons and heels the only dusting I'll be doing is with my long mascaraed lashes... ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2017-12-03 10:29 PM


...to behold.

...just bein' Bluesy

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