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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-12-01 11:23 AM


This is a poem about nothing at all
because my mind is blank.
I am echoing from ear to ear.
Not even the cobwebs
have anything to contribute
to the thought processes.
I close my eyes to concentrate
and my chin falls to my chest.
My breathing deepens
but my thoughts don’t.
The only thing I can
fill my thought bubble with
is ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ.
A couple of toothpicks later,
and my eyes are open
and unblinking.
I can see clearly
but my thinking is opaque.
My stomach is talking,
it wants cake.
Without a first or second thought
it’s yogurt I brought
and yogurt I will have too.
My stomach will have to make due.
Yes, my mind is empty,
it’s a big ole goose egg,
hollow as a wooden leg.
Amazing what I can write
about nothing,
it is the one thing I have
more than enough of.

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-12-01 12:19 PM


quote:
"Amazing what I can write
about nothing,
it is the one thing I have
more than enough of"
Like 'looking' at air, you've discovered that a muse is where you find it, Miss Lori, proving that "writer's block" is a myth!  

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2017-12-01 12:24 PM


I sat around for a couple of hours waiting for something 'brilliant" to come to mind... but nothing did, so I went with that. As soon as I decided to write about nothing the words flowed like water. ~L
Poet In Pink
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Posts 1066
MI
3 posted 2017-12-02 02:35 AM


Your nothing is a whole lotta fun something in my book!!!  Cute lil' ditty Lori Lou ~ Thanks for the smile  
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