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Open Poetry #50

Falling for Her Type

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2017-02-07 08:27 PM

Falling for Her Type

If I gave in to her Love
it would be in the morning
after a hot cup of cocoa
had warmed our hearts;
the beauty of her well formed smile,
whipped cream all over her perfect lips,
not one good reason to stay apart,
many reasons to want a kiss;
her essence pulling me in
her presence making my day begin and end,
her pretty ears listening to me
as if I have good things to say;
and yet I'm not sure if what we're sharing is Love
but when we share a close dance
it seems Love has a possible chance,
and what of my feelings
what are they revealing,
why do I consider her so fine,
it must be because she
is so slender and pretty,
I fall for her type almost every time.

JamesLee
2/7/17

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2017-02-08 11:49 PM

Love is a feeling and being such, one can't find it by looking. That's called something else.

Beautiful poetry James.

...just bein' Bluesy

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2017-02-09 11:43 PM

You had me at hot cocoa and whipped cream.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2017-02-11 09:31 AM

simple, pure, and fine Romanticism, J.M. !

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2017-02-13 09:12 PM

thank you Bluesy, Blues Serenade and secondhanddreampoet for reading and responding...james

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