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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-11-21 08:45 PM


All pretty fluffy colors
Hidden inside so sweet
Wacked till broken open
With the same old stick


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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-11-22 12:55 PM


Such a pretty girl
When she hung from the wash line
Mistaken for rug

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2017-11-22 05:19 AM


such a jealous bone
wielded by a silly man
beating a dead horse.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
3 posted 2017-11-22 12:19 PM


Men are sometimes men
Sometimes they're like little boys
Sometimes they're sleeping


...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2017-11-22 07:55 PM


you are observant
your words are those of wisdom
and rooted in truth

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
5 posted 2017-11-23 12:59 PM


You relate with ease
Be cautious with easy ears
I too am a man...  

** Thank you, dear Lori, for your kind compliment. You always humble me. I appreciate you, my friend.


...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2017-11-24 06:07 PM


appreciation
is what makes life go
and a smile to glow

just a little nod
that says you've done good, friend
I think well of you


Hard to be humble
when you are awesome like me
but you do alright

I read with envy
all your incredible lines
and wish they were mine



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