I Had A Bank Job Once...After That I Worked In A Scullery For 15 Years...

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Open Poetry #50

I Had A Bank Job Once...After That I Worked In A Scullery For 15 Years...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

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In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-11-14 02:51 AM

So free, my body and soul will be
when all that binds me is set to flee
When you and I are Man and Wife
and God gives us a brand new life

We searched and waited for so many years
through occasional smiles and a few fallen tears
But to no avail did love come our way
‘til March twenty-fourth our anniversary day

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2017-11-14 07:54 AM

This has got a little different beat and tone than your usual fare. It was very difficult to dance to. And it didn't seem as happy as it read on the surface. Maybe it was the 15 year stint in the scullery. Anyway my first reaction was "How sweet" but then it was like "Hey, wait a minute." You are keeping me on my toes Bluesy. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2017-11-14 07:36 PM

Thank you so much for your reply, Miss Lori.

You're a credit to your own inquiring mind and keen perceptions.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2017-11-14 08:54 PM

Oh no, Bluesy, THANK YOU for your supportive and complementary replies to my comments. Makes me more willing to stick my neck out
when it comes to commenting.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2017-11-15 12:27 PM

Well then, I regard it as a privilege and a pleasure 'doing business' with you, Lori Rhoden.

For the meantime, here at Pip, it appears as though it's just you and I.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v0sxMMsDgtM

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2017-11-16 05:27 AM

Love that rendition of that song! Gosh, I had forgotten about Crystal Gayle and her long,long hair. What a great blast to the past. Thank you so much! ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2017-11-16 01:42 PM

...'welcome Miss Lori

...just bein' Bluesy

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