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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2017-10-17 06:26 PM


God and I passed
on the side of the road
we both kept going
our eyes straight ahead
he went his way
I went my way
never to see
each another again

©September 30, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-17-2017 09:41 PM).]

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-10-17 10:15 PM


Still, you recognized Him.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2017-10-18 08:32 AM


Yup, can't say that I didn't.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2017-10-18 08:42 AM


and he recognized you....~L
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2017-10-18 08:44 AM


Can't be sure of that, Lori.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2017-10-18 09:11 AM


I am. He is God after all...Omnipotent and all that jazz. ~L
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2017-10-18 09:34 AM


. . . and all that jazz is for sure . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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7 posted 2017-10-18 10:39 PM


After reading this I can't help but wonder what would of been said had you both spoke...Much enjoyed Jerry   Alana
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2017-10-19 09:55 AM


Thank you, Alana, for your comments and your continued support.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
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9 posted 2017-12-02 11:06 PM


it's said the parent has to be "bigger" than the child . . .(more mature, etc.)

I'm sure He recognized you - disappointed He didn't acknowledge His child.

walk easy, my friend.

j.


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