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September Tide
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September Tide |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Gracefully she flowed, entwined Along her tattered path Flowing deeply, and wide at times Others, a narrow wrath Falling off the cliffs with grace Alight, she was reprieved Gathered, she was bound for that place The river never leaves Her journey, hard fought, has ended The bitter tears have cried Swept away into the ocean By that September tide Miss you mom.... Joan L. Bandy 1952-2016 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just beautiful, my friend! Could feel you love. j. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
A beautiful and touching tribute to your Mom ~ So sorry for your loss ~ God Bless ~ Alana |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Absolutely beautiful and so very touching. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is wonderfully warm and touching. What a beautiful way to describe your Mom's life. I know she is proud of you and you miss her terribly. Bless your heart. ~L |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Beautiful, touching, excellent poem. I know just how that feels. I lost my mom 6 years ago... has it really been that long... Every time I try to write a poem or song about her, and what she meant to me, I'm unhappy with my words and toss it. Words fail, I suppose. I therefore commend you for your lovely tribute to her. "Beauty has a way of seeming unconcerned" - Neil Finn, 'Terrorize Me' |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so beautifully written and felt, a wonderful dedication to someone who loved you very much...we never fully appreciate our mothers until we become adults ourselves. |
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