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LeeJ
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0 posted 2017-10-11 07:48 AM


I see sleep combing the hair of passion

Words becoming cannons of power

Dangers came thru that torn front door

Along with some voice of temptation

But the Metaphysical rules ingrained

and I

Ate them like a drum that beats

In the ear of life, and reason

Oh Spirit of time, releases new metaphors

Even though roads grow long grey thoughts

Theology speaks in our decomposed minds

Free-will is the order of nature purified

Suffering begins a new clean boulevard

It is a poor thing to refuse old books

To ignore those landscapes is to

Corrode in the moments of time

Where rumors stumble into fixed tomorrows

Blending with a gaze of ancient songs

Long formulas of teaching

How the last night of longing begins

Old hearts dream of courage
  while combing the hair of passion


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2017-10-11 08:49 AM


Old books. My forte! I derived an education by the way of old books, Lee. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2017-10-11 10:18 AM


Love this
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2017-10-11 05:53 PM


Profound indeed, LeeJ.

Poet In Pink
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4 posted 2017-10-12 11:50 PM


Wise words of wisdom sprinkled throughout this Lee ~ I totally enjoyed each line...Each thought...Love poetry that engages my imagination and thoughts ~ Your poem did just that ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Hugz Alana
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