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Drifting
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Drifting |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Love is at the helm Yet the passion steers Somewhere in the hold Logic shackled tears. A cry from the nest: Onward without fear! Eden never reach Anchored to a pier. Then Logic whispers: Do proceed with care Dangers below lurk Onward if you dare! Thus at last the ship From the shore is cast I heard best one be Fastened to a mast. Ask me not which port Where the anchor be Last I checked was still Drifting out at sea. CG |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Aye CG, drifting still. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sometimes, I have that helpless feeling of drifting with no means of control. Excellent written poem. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Love that! A lot of drifting in this world as love can be stormy. Even looking from the nest doesn't tell the whole story. I'll use a favorite line from a movie I loved ~ "Beware the under toad" Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
As long as it stays adrift and doesn't sink that is what matters most  Much enjoyed CG ~ Alana |
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psychofemale Junior Member Posts 18 Tennessee |
Nice flow and rhyme on this one!!! *These evil vultures always win* |
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