Open Poetry #50 |
The Box Beneath The Bridge |
Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
There’s a box beneath a bridge, where two lovers hide from lights It once contained a Whirlpool fridge, but now it warms their nights It’s not for lack of money, they’ve enough to get them by They wanted to build their dream house, but the prices reached the sky So they found a means of living and to keep their arms and legs To each other they are giving, but to society they’re dregs And love abounds within the ply’s when Bluesy and Rainbush embrace Her intoxicating gypsy eyes Spread Stardust ‘round the place Yes, there’s a box beneath a bridge, where two lovers spend their night When once it contained a Whirlpool fridge, now it glows with true love’s light ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I never was one for boxes under bridges, but slept many times in a darkened ally ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah, I hear, feel you deep, my man . . . and I've never tried your way, nor Jerry's, but I got so drunk one night (Chinese New Years Celebration) at the NavCommSta, Guam (Naval Communications Station)'s EM Club, that when I started to the barracks about 2 in the morning, a mile or two away through the jungle essentially, I got "off track" and wound up sleeping IN the jungle, unbeknownst to me, until daylight! Anyway, much enjoyed your piece - well written. j. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You always relate in your way JerryPat. You're a man of great experience. Thanks for reading and commenting. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
A grand tale Jimmy! Ha! The moral? Never drink alone and always have a designated paddler. Thanks for reading & commenting. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Sounds like a dream home to me...Where there is love....There is everything Much enjoyed Bluesy ~ Alana |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Come join us, Miss Pinky! I've just acquired a Hotpoint dual-ply dryer box for an addition! BYOB...K? ...just bein' Bluesy |
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