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Open Poetry #50

Adam's Son

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2017-09-08 11:05 AM

A chip off the old block I am,
     No regard for propriety.
Society's rules I condemn,
I n'er get up until p.m.
     One thing on my mind, that is thee.

As with the rest of Adam's kin,
     I am easily led by Eve.
Some say my heart is made of tin,
I merely nod at them and grin.
     I wear my lust upon my sleeve.

Man, who has sprung from Adam's seed,
     Builders of nations; weakness for her.
For her embrace on knees we plead,
We have such a licentious need.
     She is love's grand entrepreneur.

©August 11, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

1 posted 2017-09-08 02:45 PM

Great take on thangs Jerry Always enjoy your writing ~ Alana

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-09-08 03:00 PM

And you, Alana, are a fantastic committer. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2017-09-09 04:09 AM

quote:
"A chip off the old block I am,
No regard for propriety"

I like this opener to your poetry, Sir! Totally enjoyed reading!

BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (09-09-2017 06:01 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2017-09-09 08:11 AM

Good to see you here today, Bluesy. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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