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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
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Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2017-01-30 10:50 PM


commercial photography locationsy
[photo taken by someone in my family on vacation in Manila]

She stares stolidly straight ahead
not daring to catch the eye
of those in vehicles passing by
lest they see her desperation
and the gnawing envy within her
of the weak, weary and hopeless
for the strong and opulent.

All the light of life within her
has gone, but still she holds precious
the small life she carries in her arms
to brave the shame struggling  in her
to stand  with hand curled tight
a silent plea  for anyone to drop some coins-
crumbs to ease  hunger just for the day.  


@jjote 01/30/2017

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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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1 posted 2017-01-31 04:39 AM


heartfelt piece - thanks for sharing
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2017-01-31 08:06 AM


Tragic in its way, jjote . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2017-01-31 12:59 PM


some people are "brave" indeed, the tittle fit so well
thanks
yann

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2017-02-05 12:58 PM


Beautifully captured, both the photo and the words, my friend.

j.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
5 posted 2017-02-05 03:06 PM


Good interpretation of the image Josefina.

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2017-02-07 08:37 PM


you did a good job here of capturing desperation and Love...james
jjote
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since 2002-12-25
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Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2017-02-11 09:54 AM


Thanks everyone for all your encouraging comments. Appreciate them
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