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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2017-01-30 05:14 PM

I ran to her
within my wanderlust
to the rhythm
of her own feelings that
dreams are forever
sanctified with my holy hearts’ beat

I sought the vision of her intuitive acuity
looking into my inner
never shuttered heart’s skylight
allowing the light
to once and for all
break through so totally

my mouth slightly open
she surrendered
fused with my essences’ forever hug
now it was radiance
merging with joie de vivre
hearts overflowing

for once the world stood still
we breathed as one

©January 30, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2017-01-30 06:56 PM

methinks Jerry you've been biten by the love bug these days, it's flowing into your poems. But don't mind me, am just a cynic

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-01-30 06:59 PM

Thank you, jjote, cynic or not.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2017-02-01 04:57 PM

beautiful...james

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2017-02-01 05:02 PM

Thank you, James . . .

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Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

5 posted 2017-02-03 02:28 AM

quote:
now it was radiance
merging with joie de vivre
hearts overflowing

Must have been the 'one'. I say that JerryPat, because the words just beautifully flow that way.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2017-02-03 07:57 AM

Yes Bluesy, it was most definitely the "one." Thank you for your insight.

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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2017-03-16 06:13 PM

Nice, my friend, very nicely done.
You left just enough room for a little daring imagination.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2017-03-16 06:19 PM

Heh.Heh . . . Gotta be careful with that "daring imagination." Thanks JL.

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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2017-03-16 07:01 PM

wonderful, you let me dream of true vibrations

have a good day

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2017-03-16 07:11 PM

I thank you, Yann, hope those "true vibrations" will be good for you..

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

11 posted 2017-03-18 10:27 PM

Warm reminisces that just get better with age like a fine wine. The insertion of French was perfectly timed.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...please!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2017-03-18 10:59 PM

Many thanks, PU., for stopping by and checking out "A Bayou Love Song."

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