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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2017-08-10 11:43 AM


         Of Love and Spring

The edge of this forest-world is
dark and silent like the edge of
     the twilight sea.
The cicada sing their sad lament
to another Summer passing.
There is a first touch of Autumn
    in the evening air.
One greets the thought of Winter
with sad memories of all things
that should have been but never
    were;
and yet, this fine Summer moon,
above the lonely journey of the
    ‘now,’
conjures the finest hopes and
dreams of Love and Spring as
yet to come.

                    --- b. e. adams (8/10/2017)


© Copyright 2017 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2017-08-10 12:15 PM


Yep,the seasons are much like a life lived. We, like the seasons, go through stages, happy and carefree like spring, nurting like summer. Then like fall we begin to fade slightly, only to be devoured come winter. Enjoyed this one.

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Poet In Pink
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2 posted 2017-08-11 08:35 PM


Another beauty Bruce Love how you used the seasons in this ~ Much enjoyed~ Alana
secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2017-08-11 10:17 PM


thanks to both of you, JP and Alana
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2017-08-12 09:53 PM


nice little slice of nature...james
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2017-08-13 10:58 AM


Thank you, JM.
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