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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2017-08-06 11:56 AM

I ran to her
within my wanderlust
to the rhythm
of her own down and dirty
dreams are forever
sanctified with my holy hearts’ beat

I sought the vision of her intuitive acuity
looking into my inner
never shuttered heart’s skylight
allowing the light
to once and for all
break through so totally

my mouth slightly open
she surrendered completely
fused with my essences’ forever hug
now it was radiance
merging with joie de vivre
hearts overflowing

for once the world stood still
we breathed as one

©January 30, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2017-08-06 09:06 PM

Oh so romantic. Really nice poem JP.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-08-06 09:40 PM

Thank you, Blues.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Boomer Styles
Member

since 2014-03-02

Posts 194
South Side Of Success

3 posted 2017-08-06 10:01 PM

quote:
"I sought the vision of her intuitive acuity"

This line leaped out from your poetry and snagged my attention in a most demanding way.

Very much enjoyed.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2017-08-06 10:25 PM

Thank you very much Boomer.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

5 posted 2017-08-07 12:17 PM

Such a fine love song indeed ~ Much enjoyed it from beginning to end Jerry Alana

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2017-09-14 12:11 PM

Keep this love song going...james

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2017-09-14 08:21 AM

Ah, I thank you from the bottom of my heart, Alana, very sorry I missed your comment.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2017-09-14 08:22 AM

Thanks James, for finding this poem and commenting on on it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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