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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-08-04 06:40 AM


It is not my intention to debate.
I have my frustrations
and I’ll give them to you straight.
The Electoral College failed
and I’ll tell you why.
Its purpose is to protect
an ignorant electorate
from electing a flim-flam candidate.
It has long been debated
that the winner of the popular vote
should hold some Electoral sway.
Especially in this modern day
climate of communications,
voters see and hear enough to take note.
Unfortunately due to political pandering
we have a problem called Gerrymandering.
We carve up our districts in red or blue
to give an advantage to me or you.
They aren’t accurate or proportional.
It is just something that they do to win.
Like this voter fraud malarkey
dressed up in a big hoop-dee-do.
A thinly disguised attempt to
make it harder for certain citizens to vote.
The people have taken note
of the who’s behind what and why.
And then we wonder why they don’t trust
the system enough to cast a vote
but are quick to give an opinion.
A lot of people called for change.
They thought running the White House
like a business was the way to go.
We didn’t need a president,
we needed a CEO.
But what we got
was a horse of a different color,
orange to be exact with a palomino mane.
A show pony for sure,
with limited tricks.
A maverick on the loose,
tweeting just for kicks.
It’d be different if he’d cop
to what he doesn’t know
instead of putting on a show
of Presidential ignorance.
His supporters live under a pile
of number one grade A denial.
God forbid their man
should come under fire
for being an asshat and a liar.


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2017-08-04 09:12 AM


This man can't even take a breath unless those who hate him pounces on him. I agree he is not the kind of presiden we are used to.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2017-08-04 09:48 AM


Hopefully, America and Americans were never "used to" an egregious,
egomaniacal/narcissistic, chauvinistic, vindictive, bigot and B.S.-artist
with no adequate sense of governance (not that I had any serious
'respect' for Hillary nor her 'hubby' Bubba either) [... and I actually hail
from a v. long line of New England Republican conservatives.]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2017-08-04 11:18 AM


Jerry,
Hate is such a word of rhetoric and the auto response to any criticism. If you have not heard him lie with your own ears then your news source is blindly biased. If you are comfortable with a leader that acts like an out of control emperor, I hope you will be comfortable with the repercussions.~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2017-08-04 11:24 AM


How refreshing! Someone willing to call a spade a spade that isn't a Democrat or Independent. Thanks for sharing. ~L
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2017-08-04 12:39 PM


More like a psychologically unstable, totally self-focused 'demigod'
than an 'emperor' even. [I call it the "mini-Hitler Complex"].

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2017-08-04 01:14 PM


Trump is an embarassment and the fact that he has the nuke code makes me very afraid.  Thanks for your post..these are strange times we live in, how we ever got here is beyond my comprehension.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2017-08-04 01:48 PM


You and me both Blues! It'd be different if he was just a goofy buffoon, but he is dangerous in his ideals. He is the embodiment of all the fear and festering of a simple minded set of people. ~L
Cerulean
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8 posted 2017-08-05 02:19 AM


Enjoyed how you rhymed this poem, Lori. I'm just now reading everyone's comments. I understand everyone's frustrations. Yes, as Blues said we live in strange times... but you're all looking in the wrong places.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
9 posted 2017-08-05 07:10 AM


Cerluean,
Quit being so mysterious. Where should we be looking? (and don't give me a web address) ~L

Cerulean
Member
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10 posted 2017-08-05 07:56 AM


Lori, let's just forget about it.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
11 posted 2017-08-05 10:46 AM


Okay by me.

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
12 posted 2018-11-26 04:54 AM


Lori, I am surprised at you!  How COULD you insult horses and ponies so?  I will comfort myself with the thought that they were a metaphorical horse and a metaphorical pony!  I know you know I am not angry with you, but his "hat" doesn't deserve the name, "mane", nor the colour "palamino".  I know you love horses and ponies, despite the poem.  
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
13 posted 2018-11-26 06:43 AM


Owl,
How you you make me laugh, you beautiful soul.
I'm not surprised this did not offend you except the animal references. Non-American Pip patrons are much more tolerant of my political views. Now that you have run this up the flag pole again, we'll see how it fares.

We had a blizzard here yesterday and Mizz Kitty sends her greeting from the warmth of the corner of the couch. Winston says running through the snow can be fun once he gets his old bones off the porch. He is like a little kid at bath time- can't get them in the bath, then you can't get them out! At the moment, he says hi from his cozy bed in the living room.
Bless your heart. ~L

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
14 posted 2018-11-26 08:37 AM


Not from you, but I was expecting to be swallowed whole - or chewed into tiny little pieces before being swallowed (still am, sorta) with this post, but oh so glad to get such a lovely reply from you.  It will make up for all of the "being chewed" ones, if I am indeed right in expecting to be eaten.

I hope your excellent poem fares well.  You are very brave and you have my support all the way!  

AND THANK YOU for the messages from – and delightful updates from and about Miss Kitty and Winston, the precious, cuddly, darling angels that they are!  Just picturing them both where they are, and Winston in the snow!  Please give them both multiple kissles and huggles and cuddles and sweet somethings whispered in their ears and said out loudly from their adoring Auntie Di from across the HUUUUUUGE water bowl!  Bless your heart too (and theirs)!

I have a poem composed of 4 limericks that I wouldn’t dare post on an American poetry forum, but I will email it to you.  I strongly suspect that you will enjoy it, lol!  

Diana

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