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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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0 posted 2017-08-03 07:35 PM

There’s a Last Chance for Everything

Swirling clouds dance through the
    azure emptiness
to a soft breeze and morning song.

This verdant forest of dapple sun
holds more truth than any man
   shall ever know.

A lone heron roams an endless sky
above a lake of Summer dreams.

Deep thoughts flow here in subtle
    tides and currents
but returning always to seek
    her heart,
and one last chance for
the greatest love story
this world has ever known.

                   --- b. e. adams (8/3/2017)
                        [my birthday poem]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2017-08-03 08:32 PM

There is alwys that "one last chance." This is absolutely one of your very best writes.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2017-08-03 09:57 PM

Thanks JP !

Cerulean
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Posts 109

3 posted 2017-08-03 09:58 PM

quote:
A lone heron roams an endless sky
above a lake of Summer dreams.

Magical.

This poem is beautiful. And I wish you a happy birthday.

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2017-08-03 10:28 PM

Thanks so much for the comment/reply pursuant to this li'l "poetic scribble" and also for the birthday wish !

Cerulean
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Posts 109

5 posted 2017-08-03 10:42 PM

You're welcome!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2017-08-04 11:44 PM

Really love this one, Bruce.

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2017-08-05 05:59 AM

Thanks Ida !

[I would argue that 'the world' (especially this double-post-modern
"Runaway American Dream") needs more 'incurable Romantics?!']

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

8 posted 2017-08-07 12:55 PM

Always believe in that one last chance! Beautifully penned as always Bruce ~ Happy Belated Birthday my friend ~ Hope it was one of your best ever! Alana

secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2017-08-07 12:40 PM

Thanks, Alana !

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