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Nature's Serenity
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI 
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Flowers wake up beneath morn's dew Stretching upward to skies of blue All things look beautiful and new A lovely view, a lovely view Bright red robins sing a sweet tune As they bask in the warmth of June Across the lake from the lagoon Comes cry of loon, comes cry of loon Butterflies frolic amongst the trees Playing hide and seek with the bees They both take flight with such quick ease Riding the breeze, riding the breeze Beauty of nature doth abound All we need do is look around So many wonders to be found It does astound, It does astound © Poet In Pink 2017 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You have given us nature in our own back yard, Alana. The morn's dew, the beautiful robin gave me visions of growing up in southern Arkansas. Beautiful images all the way through this one. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Pinktunia, Very nicely done! Your rhymes flowed with ease and you painted a lovely picture of summer! ~L |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
wonderful, nature has a such convincing beauty yann |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thankies Jerry  I'm glad this stirred up some good memories for you ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you Lori-Lei You always say the sweetest thangs! Pinktunia |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
I agree Yann Thank you for stopping by to read ~ Alana |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry reads like a breath of fresh air, literally. |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you so much Blues Glad you enjoyed ~ Alana |
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Cerulean Member Posts 109 |
Wow. Just wow. When I was a child, I used to have visions of nature similar to this. Something so simple. So elegant. Except my visions were usually that of in a primitive forest on a bright day. Seeing the shadows of the leaves of trees. Seeing the crisp, clear creek. Delighting in the small sunrays that go through the branches of trees. Very simple. Like that. I also like how you repeat phrases in the last line of each stanza. It has a mesmerizing effect. I used to do that with a couple of my poems a long time ago, back when I could write way better than I do now. I've said enough for now, but thank you for sharing! |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you so much for the read and sharing your love for nature too. After reading your reply I meshed our thoughts together and wrote Woodland Wonders ~ I'll post it soon and hope you enjoy ~ Thanks for inspiring it Alana |
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Cerulean Member Posts 109 |
You're welcome and I look forward to your poem "Woodland Wonders". I'll keep an eye out for it. Thanks! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Butterflies frolic amongst the trees Playing hide and seek with the bees They both take flight with such quick ease Riding the breeze, riding the breeze smiles and hugs Lee J. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Nicely done, Pink. The repetition draws in to a form of a chant, which results in a meditative state in awe of the Nature's beauty. CG |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, certainly brings out natures wonders . . . nicely written... j. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
wonderful...I like how you used each of the last lines twice...james |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for the read Lee Appreciate you ~ Glad you enjoyed ~ Huggerz Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello CG Thankies for the read ~ Always nice to hear from you ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you kindly for stopping by Jimmy Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you so much James Glad you enjoyed ~ Alana |
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