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Open Poetry #50

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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0 posted 2017-05-21 04:17 AM

The sun laced window
shears the light of the moon,
placing it around your neck
like diamonds sparkling beneath our kiss

Translated ebbs with interpreted flows
creating soft wafting breezes
which sing through the lace of our lovemaking
only the quiet of this night has known

Let the night then do its will
for the morning brings no remorse
You and I lover, alone within its sphere
and the magic that is ours to share

Just out looking for the real me...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
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1 posted 2017-05-21 08:16 AM

how lovely and romantic, although your title is a little cumbersome for such a sweet poem.
I liked this poem very much. ~L

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2017-05-21 10:38 AM

Pure Romanticism most fine ! (better title perhaps?)

The night will always do as it will !

Poet In Pink
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3 posted 2017-05-21 02:48 PM

Hello P A rather interesting title, then again you don't need me to tell you that ha ha That is why you chose it All that aside you have painted a romantic picture ~ No remorse on the morrow...That is always a good thing ~ Much enjoyed ~ Pinky

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Posts 388
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4 posted 2017-05-21 03:50 PM

Thank you Lori Rhoden for your kind response...title not withstanding.

Just out looking for the real me...

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Posts 388
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5 posted 2017-05-21 03:52 PM

Thank you too Mr. Adams! You are also a 'romantic at heart' as your own fine poetry always exhibits.

Just out looking for the real me...

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Posts 388
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6 posted 2017-05-21 03:58 PM

Hey you Pinky! Nothing gets past you, does it?

quote:
"A rather interesting title, then again you don't need me to tell you that ha ha That is why you chose it"

Your comments and 'insights' are much appreciated. Let's keep it our own little "Victoria's Secret"...shall we?

Just out looking for the real me...

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