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Open Poetry #50

The Shimmering One

P.U Stinkenbaum
Member
Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

0 posted 2017-05-06 10:21 PM

A darkened evening’s warm glow
illuminates her tears
My wandering fingertips
search her skin for silent wishes

A dim light enters my body,
guiding patterns, forming words
Surrounding images obscured from view,
as sentries guarding the Shimmering One

Like a diamond in a sea of broken glass,
her faceted brilliance engulfs and enchants me
A seeming reluctance to be known,
yet led to seek the winds of change

Setting our captive thoughts free,
watching them whirl and flail about
Two ribbons lovingly entangled,
never to be loosed or lost again

Now, as all our storms
pass by my love,
comes the beginning
of eternity for you and I

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

[This message has been edited by P.U Stinkenbaum (05-07-2017 02:58 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2017-05-07 12:16 PM

oh how romantic!~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-05-07 01:45 PM

There are times when you must absolutely regroup and come to terms with what attracted each of you to one another. But it is the deep abiding spirit which is the most important thing which needs to be pulled back to where it once was.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2017-05-07 05:56 PM

Same as Jerry and Lori said. Nicely expressed.

jimmy

P.U Stinkenbaum
Member
Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

4 posted 2017-05-07 09:41 PM

Thank you Lori Rhoden, for your feminine air.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

P.U Stinkenbaum
Member
Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

5 posted 2017-05-07 09:46 PM

Thanks Mr. Bolton for your insightful reply. You see much in so little. I appreciate that.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

P.U Stinkenbaum
Member
Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

6 posted 2017-05-07 09:47 PM

Thanks for your visit and your concurrence Mr. Beard.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

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