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Young Love
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Where you cognizant that you loved me, And of your love was I aware? Young love can happen when you're old, Consume you like purified air. Destiny, like wind to your back, Pushes you onward, n'er to end. Once in a while I see you pass, I've kept your secret my good friend. ©April 21, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
quote:To this I commend with a resounding, "Yes"! Does it ever! Well said, well written. "Secrets" Mr. Bolton? My lips are sealed!  Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, PU, appreciate your comments. Lips sealed? No problem there. Just a ramblin' kind of poem. Sssh! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, Another one of your wonderful love poems. You have a knack. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much, Lori. Eh . . . some you win, some you lose. Thanks again. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Jerry, young love is overated. True love comes with experience and deeper feelings. Both are welcome but I like the love that comes from deep within the heart. nice to see you writing. latearrival (jo) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, jo. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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