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Don't Tell Me, Her Name Is On My Lips...
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Don't Tell Me, Her Name Is On My Lips... |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
It was a damp and dreary Tuesday in the evening at the bar The tavern's door was open when she entered like a star She asked for a 'Cuba Libre' as she brushed my arm aside My nostrils flared from perfume as she turned to me and sighed Her hair was thick and flaxen and her eyes deep almond brown Her lips were full and painted and curved as if to frown Soon my gaze was recognized and she asked what was my thought Her beauty, I said, was stunning and could it well be bought? She smiled and said, "all things my friend, are always best when shared And when it comes to lovin' me two souls will then be bared" She finished her drink and smiled at me then turned with grace to leave saying... "And when next you fall in love my friend, perhaps you'll think of me" Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Well, PU, I guess she told you. But I guess that is just the sort of thing that happens when a man lets his eyes bug out and his tongue fall to the ground. Better luck next time.  ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep. I have been in that same situation a few times, PU. It's called learning to deal with, and understand the feminine mystic. Didn't work for me, I'm still mystified. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thanks Lori Rhoden. Of all the nights to be in a tux instead of my Che Guevara T-shirt.  Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
You're right Mr. Bolton! I'm gonna pick me up a copy of Betty Freiden's book and get me some moxie! Thanks for the comments and the inspiration! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Many floors have I been thrown to, my friend, by sudden and on-going dreams - - - but that made the victories (when "they" allowed them)much, much sweeter. enjoyed j. |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thanks so much for you visit Mr. Beard. The important thing is that you got yourself back up and gave it another 'go'! Thanks again! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed reading...james |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thanks for reading James! Aloha! Just out looking for the real me... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i very know that feeling, thanks for the absolute loving message, so delicate and subtle yann |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello P.U. Your words are a reminder that one should never judge a book by its cover. As the old saying goes....Win some, lose some. Thanks for the read ~ Alana |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thanks Pinkie! I always judge books by their "cover". Sometimes I'm right (win) and sometimes I'm wrong (lose). Like you, I'm very much divided on the whole 'yin~yang thing. Thanks again. Just out looking for the real me... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Enjoyed! |
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