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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2020-11-14 12:02 PM


Daydreamer Awaken

Before the moment's passed
daydreamer awaken
give life to your visions
make the beauty and light last
come and catch the flailing hand
of wonder and discovery
daydreamer listen
your heart and mind are in demand

Before the future is past
daydreamer you're aching
to climb the highest rung
look down from up high at last
come into the sun, open your words
open your heart's desire
daydreamer singing
your songs one day will be heard

Before the well dries up
daydreamer keep making
the world shine in song
all the darkness, you light it up
come and try, light the fuse
fuel your heart's fire
daydreaming burning
your ever yearning for a muse

You want her, you need her
then you should go get her
daydreamer awaken
and make it a reality

"It's never over, she is the tear that hangs inside my soul forever" -Jeff Buckley

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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2020-11-15 08:18 AM


Most often we do not make our daydreams happen, but this is a wonderful call to do so. As for the ending, I know someone who should read this. Enjoyed!

"I know this love will tear me to pieces
I know his hands will dig up my secrets"

Meg Myers


2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2020-11-19 06:42 PM


reach one's dreams is important, we know it and have to perdure,
a sensitive poem
yann

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