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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2020-10-31 11:41 AM



I jumped off the roof this morning
to see how well i bounce
my doctor says
I‘m not as full of hot air
as my wife says I am
~~~
Ps... had a déjà vu feeling while writing this one, so I’m not 100% sure if I wrote it or remembered it from somewhere.

                 


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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2020-10-31 06:43 PM


Good for a smile, wouldn't worry on the deja vu feeling.  Might wanna get a second opinion on that diagnosis though.  

Time falling back...don't get caught in the dark!

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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2 posted 2020-11-10 12:29 PM


Loved it Rex.  Especially the PS - I know that dejavu feeling, expecially when I wake in the morning with my back hurting and my wife standing beside the bed . . . smiling.

hang in there,

j.

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