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Open Poetry #50

wake up/go back to sleep

Forlorn Angel
Member
Posts 143

0 posted 2020-09-09 03:03 AM

Peering at you from under my hat
The look goes unnoticed
At just a glance
If you had known who you were looking at
You wouldn't have missed this chance

A lot on the table
Chips for who?
Anteing up turned out to be
more then you could lose

Dinner for two
at the bar
Midnight tacos
That will be left
in the car

Streets are empty
Whole town went to sleep
And I all heard was
"Wise to KEEP"

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

1 posted 2020-09-16 09:48 PM

Forlorn Angel, I'm not sure on this one,
but I'm Very Intrigued, you've set the
scene peaking the readers interest.

Sky~

~ Cherish Everything ~

Forlorn Angel
Member
Posts 143

2 posted 2020-09-27 02:24 AM

Thank you, knowing what to hold and what to throw away, it's always about what's worth keeping.

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