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Forlorn Angel
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0 posted 2020-09-09 02:00 AM



If poetry were a keyhole
And time were standing still
With everything to wonder
On your window sill

If magic WERE like clay
And fairies were real
If misty mountains really
Hid a secret land away

If Poetry were a keyhole
And time was
slipping away

If secrets lands
Were yours to unlock
Like a key holders fortay

If poetry were a keyhole
And I had no time to waste
I'd find a way to see the world
In a very different way!


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augustsky
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1 posted 2020-09-09 06:45 PM


I enjoyed the whole idea of this.."if Poetry
were a keyhole"

Liked the Whimsey..

Sky~

~ Cherish Everything ~

Forlorn Angel
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Posts 143

2 posted 2020-09-10 03:25 AM


Thank you, I wrote it from a drawing I drew. I think that poetry and art have a way of inspiring each other. When you can't write draw and a poem comes out.


Temptress
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3 posted 2020-09-13 07:43 PM


I thought poetry was a keyhole of some sort. Loved this! I'd love to explore new worlds!

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



Michael
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4 posted 2020-09-13 08:22 PM


I agree, poetry is a keyhole...to any dimension.  My poetry is a trapdoor in the ocean, and beneath it, a stairwell to the darkness and unknown depths below.  just sayin'


Michael

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5 posted 2020-09-19 03:11 PM


I love this...it wove a magic only I could see...wonderful writing
Forlorn Angel
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6 posted 2021-03-15 11:56 PM


Thank you all for your much appreciated comments I do not get on here much and I see that I miss a lot when I don't I will have to stop by more often.
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