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Open Poetry #50

A Girl so Blue

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

0 posted 2017-04-21 05:45 PM

We knew a girl who was so blue.
Why was she sad we never knew.
We wondered but we had no clue.

Some said she was sad for a man,
Whispers about a girl, Diane,
Who left her and moved to Japan,
We never knew if it were true.

She never smiled and would not laugh,
Walked around like a half-sick calf,
And had a neck like a giraffe,
It always looked a bit askew.

One day she up and went away,
She left a note and signed it Mae,
Said it was time for her to stray,
Searching for llama's in Peru.

©March 15, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

P.U Stinkenbaum
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No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

1 posted 2017-04-21 07:01 PM

Clever rhyme scheme Mr. Bolton. I liked this a lot.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-04-21 07:10 PM

Thank you very much, PU.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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3 posted 2017-04-21 09:11 PM

Sounds like you had fun with this one. I enjoyed your lightheartedness. ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2017-04-21 09:15 PM

I did have fun, Lori. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2017-04-27 06:12 PM

enjoyed reading this...james

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