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Merc's
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US 
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Merc's~ Those moonlit drives.. confessions, transgressions, miles of sun and wind, gossip at the pumps, swerves and bumps, it's all how you shift the gears.. Destination made moments, motor-hum-lullaby, chasing stars, and memory glow, Mercury rising.. Left for dead in the weeds © Augustsky [This message has been edited by augustsky (08-23-2020 01:22 PM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sky...Loved the ending of this. At first I thought it was about the planet, then figured out it was about a Mercury car. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sky...Loved the ending of this. At first I thought it was about the planet, then figured out it was about a Mercury car. Thanks for sharing...Paul The picture thing didn't work ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thanks Paul, never did have any luck with pics here.  ..Thanks also for your read.Gotta go before my sauce bubbles over..  Sky~ ~ Cherish Everything ~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sorry the pic didn't work. I supposed there's something to the fact there were two in it that intrigued me. Funny how good writing can lend itself to the imagination. I see so much more than cars in this. Michael |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
I felt the drive that you took me on with your words...well done |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thanks for the compliment Michael. Sky~ ~ Cherish Everything ~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Pleased you enjoyed the ride Star. Sky~ ~ Cherish Everything ~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A very soft take on something that might otherwise be considered an unpleasant scene. Lovely as usual. "How much is real? So much to question |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You got my imagination going Sky … I was picturing a bit of a Thelma and Louise nod as I read … much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thanks Temptress, I had posted this with a pic in the past, of 2 old mercury cars abandoned & almost completely covered in weeds & brush, couldn't get pic to work here though. Anyway..just a little tale of those 2 junkers..metaphors can be taken any where the reader likes. Sky~ ~ Cherish Everything ~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
LOL..Guess it Really did need accompanied by the pic of 2 old mercury cars buried in weeds & brush, but that wasn't meant to be. I do Like your thoughts on 'Thelma & Louise' though. Thanks for the read Sky~ ~ Cherish Everything ~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thank you Jimmy..but I'm just fine without pics, no big deal. But on that note LOL.. what you posted isn't showing..I see "Surrender"..& an image icon (with no image) Thanks for reaching out Sky ~ Cherish Everything ~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
J. Ok, Got it through the link, very beautiful image /Poem, must be 1 of your photos. Lovely work.. Thanks.. Sky~ ~ Cherish Everything ~ |
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