Open Poetry #50 |
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Reading Words |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
Reading Words Reading words filled with emotions the dark, the light filled with colors Words that ring with true devotion from hearts and minds of rare talent With tears that flow from eyes that feel the pains and agony of life Writing is a balm that might heal from scars laid bare for all to see My heart cries for the pain endured for the hurts not chosen of all Hope burning in heart to be cured of much that’s hidden deep within Then my heart rejoices with light from words that whisper there is hope Follow the path to make things right don’t let the darkness consume you Your words help me to grow, mature to release anger, fear, and pain And know that light I can procure on the path led by words sublime Teaching I need not fear myself to know feelings are a part of me My soul is not on empty shelf but goes on learning endlessly (Inspired by the Poets at PIP) Karen McNeil 2020 |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Thanks so much for allowing us to share in this poem with you. Writing can help many people that have almost lost all hope, It can help the heart and mind heal , I know from experience...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Karen, Writing is just part of the way I function now. It has saved my sanity. Couldn't stop if I wanted to. ~L |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beaytifully written as an hommage to talented poets, words are precious for everyone, your poem touched me have a nice day yann |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Karen, We all help each other with our writing..just my thoughts..but I feel all of us are broken a little in some way. Your Poem was Lovely. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
Paul...I find writing brings to light feelings I didn't realized I had buried...thank you for your comment Lori...I know just how you feel...writing holds me together and puts light in my soul...thank you for your comment Yann...it seems every time I come here and read I become inspired by the words spoken from the heart...thank you for your comment Sky...I agree we are all broken and the words we read and write seem to heal in their own way...so glad I came back...thank you for your comment |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"Then my heart rejoices with light from words that whisper there is hope" I believe it is through sharing through words that we heal most effectively, Karen. You have captured this concept beautifully. And the hope that comes of it. Michael |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
Michael...you are right...words do incredible amounts of healing for each of us...I know just writing the words gives me a feeling of relief...thank for your response |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is lovely. You are an inspiration yourself. I'm finding great support and inspiration here as I always did. I wish I hadn't spent so many years away. Thank you. "How much is real? So much to question |
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