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Scribblin' In The Sand
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Scribblin' In The Sand |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
It was a long love letter that I wrote in the sand I thought that I could sell it to a rock and roll band Maybe ol' Pat Boone would want to try it again It was a long love letter that I wrote in the sand I gave it to my honey, I thought she'd always be mine I bought her clothes and diamonds, yeah I'd treat her so fine Took her out for dinner and offered a wedding plan Now I'm layin' on the beach alone a' scribblin' in the sand It was a long love letter that I wrote in the sand Even B.B's 'Lucille' couldn't play it so sad It was a long love letter that I wrote in the sand I thought we two could make it through, holding each others hand Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminded me of the time me and my girlfriend were standing on the beach one night in Long Beach and a large buoy washed to shore...we rolled it unto the sand and wrote love messages on the sandy surface...james |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you James. I worked at the AAmco Transmission shop next to the barber school on Long Beach Boulevard during '71-'72. I appreciate the visit and the comment. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Well PU I could have written something similar about my first 2 marriages. Only instead of all the romantic stuff about the beach and sand it would have been about having babies and him being a drunk. But the last line would have been the same. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ehhh . . . Sometimes we have to just suck it up. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
It's no game searching for that one 'fearless true love', as you apparently well know Lori Rhoden. Thanks for the visit. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Yes, that's right Mr. Bolton. But it never really happened to me this way. I just write silly stuff sometimes among all the rest. But I'm happy you stopped by, thank you. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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