Open Poetry #50 |
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MojoMan |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US ![]() |
Mojo Man~ Amaze me.. wondrous as Angel Falls Hush me.. slow as a dewdrop slips an emerald leaf Enthrall me.. as I hang my heart on your rocking crescent moon Seduce me.. beneath your cape lined with mystery Feed me.. herbs of shameless desire, as we lay upon your stage of velvet moss, weeping willows fan our skin, covered in your potion glowing iridescent Surely the work of a magician's slight of hand, a hat full of stars to place in my eyes Mistified.. now I see him, now I don't. ©Augustsky |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sky...Sounds like you had one hell of a dream, or was it reality while riding on moon beams. Enjoyed very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I've only seen Angel Falls in pictures but visiting it in person is on my bucket list. Your affinity for nature is at full peak in this one. Great time of year for viewing stars, especially if you are into falling stars. Love watching the August meteor showers from up in the nearby mountains. beautiful write, Sky~ Michael |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You make me want to go here and stay. This poem soothes! I am in complete awe of your beautiful talent! The images are simple yet powerfully soft. "How much is real? So much to question |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
lol Paul..This is an oldie, in answer to your ?..it's a little of both. ![]() Thank you Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Michael, Me neither lol..but I thought it (Angel Falls) fit well in the Poem. ![]() Star-anything is amazing to me. Thanks for your wonderful reply. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Temptress, I'm glad you enjoyed, anytime a Poem can 'soothe' does my heart good. Thank you.. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed this , really a majical personnage yann |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Yann,you're always a sweet supporter, Thank you. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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