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Where My Visions Come From
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Where My Visions Come From |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
Where My Visions Come From Staring out the window I contemplate the words that flow endlessly through my head Thoughts that combine into pictures so clear filled with color and movement from within Nature fills my heart and soul peacefully with a beauty beyond the naked eye Animals play beside bubbling brooks frolicking upon carpet greenery Flowers of multiple colors swaying as soft breezes caress tender petals Water tumbles over stones so gently soothing the soul like the sound of His voice Mountain peaks raise high into clouds above bringing thoughts of eternal majesty Creations’ alive flowing all around His love reflected in everything I cannot see all pictured in my mind my words seem to be so inadequate I see clearly as on a movie screen It is my Lord Where My Visions Come From Karen McNeil 2020 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Like days of the year, we see things differently from one to another, almost with every blink, but with an all encompassing thread that ties them together in a common path. I think maybe you've been blessed with sensing that thread while writing this piece. Well done, my friend j. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...So glad to read your poetry. As you I also feel that all of my poetry comes from a higher power, because I'm just an old goat that one day started writing poetry by accident. Never had any formal training and hated school. Thanks for sharing your visions with us...Paul If you really want to read a great poetry writer read some of Michael's poems he is very good ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
jwesley...thank you...I know where my visions come from for sure and just do my best to put words to them...thank you for your insightful reply |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
Paul Wilson...I too have never had a lesson in writing...I just started to put words to my visions and hope someone can see them...thank you for your comment |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful ending to this. A lot of people focus on the negative things in life only. It's not surprising those who typically see and appreciate the beautiful things in life, also appreciate who gives them to us. Michael |
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