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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Should we choose between noise and silence? If we don’t have any memories, If you like horses, should we choose? When I don’t think about you, One and other are only reflections, |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If we don't choose, often someone else chooses for us. If your last line is separating One from the others that are only reflections, it sounds like maybe you've chosen already. Michael |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks michael for the comment, i care for silence, more than noises, but the choice is not obvious, how relevant is your comment* thanks yann |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
I would always choose silence as long as it is filled with the sounds of nature...and to be even near a horse again brings such soothing peace to the soul...somethings are not in our power right now to choose but one can dream...thank you...this poem is very pleasing |
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