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Open Poetry #50

The Breakfast Ritual

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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0 posted 2020-07-13 06:09 PM

The Breakfast Ritual

Early morning sun
a memory plucked from 1991
calls from a Collared Dove
gas sizzled bacon and burnt toast
soap lathered and whisker scraped
the passage of tea upstairs
I lovingly recall
the breakfast ritual

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2020-07-13 08:42 PM

This sounds like a peaceful ritual. Lovely writing as usual. Enjoyed.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2020-07-16 08:22 PM

rituals make us confident, magnificent poem

yann

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US

3 posted 2020-07-18 03:32 PM

Mz., These little exchanges are the most
endearing it seems..aren't they..

Enjoyed

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2020-07-18 10:56 PM

I have a very similar recollection, Marshalzu. Food may have been a little different but the nostalgia isn't. Enjoyable read.

Michael

Starmcneil 1955
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Posts 174
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2020-07-28 02:43 PM

Breakfast was always a great way to start the day...my husband and myself have a special way for Monday morning breakfast...toasted bacon and tomato sandwiches...lovely memory

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