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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
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Regression The velvet kiss the bitterness so I regress indulgent I self confess but this cold emptiness and you... always you the heartbreak the gut punch the tears embrace it all with regret always [This message has been edited by Marshalzu (07-04-2020 08:25 PM).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Life is drawn in cycles, regression is one of those. We always 180 ourselves to seek that which we are comfortable with, even if we know doing so can be laced with regret. Who's to say if one can ever be truly free, if it were the case, wouldn't they be already? Welcome back, hope you stay with us awhile. Michael |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like this. . . it's stark, and direct. It says exactly what it's supposed to say. . .and more. Well done. . . -- That which gives light must endure burning. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
@Michael. Thanks for the reply, glad to be back, it's been nearly fifteen years since I last posted here so quite a break. A return to writing thankfully is not of of the things I regret. @Sven. Thanks for the feedback, glad I managed to convey some of that emotion. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
It is difficult to embrace regret when what causes it taught valuable lessons. "...gut punch..." I like this description. I've definitely felt it. "How much is real? So much to question |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Mz, What an aura of feeling,. Well done Poet Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people with kind hearts~ |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
@Temptress. Thanks for the response. It has been a very difficult but valuable lesson to learn, I only hope I've learned it well enough to avoid repeating the same mistakes. @augustsky. Thanks for the reply, really appreciated. |
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