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A Taste Of Rita's Secret
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A Taste Of Rita's Secret |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Solid as steel Cylindrical in shape Manic in mannerisms Insatiable desire for you Distortions, first one... Then a thousand You "how do you do" me Then stab me as I smile Feeling the blunt resistance Knowing you'll part for me Lines across my back gleam A sweet scarlett Left to die in-between bedposts Robbing me and leaving me blind You weren't one for amenities I was meant for you Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hard to figure this one out. On the one hand there are positive points to the poem and then there are negative lines. Eh . . . Sorta like a real life romance. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thanks for reading and commenting Mr. Bolton. If I've mastered any one thing in this life my friend, it's ambiguity. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...james |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you James for your kind reply. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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